I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
You made a good start and have shared some interesting facts. Did you find out more about the person that St Patrick was as you might have shared more than being kind.
Hi Lacey, You started well with your facts and then they became short and very similar. I think you could challenge yourself to find more interesting information that gives detail about St. Patrick. The picture you have chosen for your background is very colourful. Miss Satherley
Hi Lacey, I like the picture you chose of St Patrick.Maybe a bit more detail next time.Do you know what country St Patrick is the patron saint of?Do you know where Britannia is? Trish Waakefield
You made a good start and have shared some interesting facts. Did you find out more about the person that St Patrick was as you might have shared more than being kind.
ReplyDeleteki ora its Lacey. thankyou for commenting on my blog
DeleteHi Lacey,
ReplyDeleteYou started well with your facts and then they became short and very similar. I think you could challenge yourself to find more interesting information that gives detail about St. Patrick. The picture you have chosen for your background is very colourful.
Miss Satherley
Hi Lacey
ReplyDeleteYou have shared some interesting information about St Patrick. I like the picture you choose of him. Keep up the good work.
Miss Rader
Hi Lacey,
ReplyDeleteI like the picture you chose of St Patrick.Maybe a bit more detail next time.Do you know what country St Patrick is the patron saint of?Do you know where Britannia is?
Trish Waakefield